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I loved this! It was simply beautiful. There were a few spelling errors that distracted from the story though, but I'm sure they're typos. Now on to the review! "Back ...

This whole piece was very good! It was a little confusing at first, but then I got the hang of it. I loved the descriptiveness that you used. "Somehow, this ...

I really enjoyed this piece. It was written well enough that I couldn't wait to find the next dead family member. I do have to say that the flow was ...

This poem was so true and so simple yet complicated at the same time. I loved the way that it flowed and how every stanza hammered away at your heart ...

This poem was great, but there's something you can add to make it absolutely amazing, I just don't know what it is... Sorry about that! But, I can help you ...

This was extremely well written, especially after only one revision! I loved the way you broke up the stanzas and started off each of them with a different action; this ...

This was beautiful and brought me to tears, actually (which is quite a feat to achieve). I loved every bit of it and there's nothing wrong with it. Well, there's ...

I loved this piece and the sort of haunting air it had about it. The ending stanza brought so much emotion inside of me (I'm a sucker for repetition) and ...

This was an exceptionally impressive piece! I enjoyed the short, simpleness of it and that it wasn't overly dramatic as most (including mine) "depression based" poems are. These six lines ...

Hey! Overall, this was a really good story! I enjoyed reading it. The characters were really well described and the whole piece flowed quite nicely. The only things I found ...

This was simply amazing. I loved every single word. I do have to agree with some of the earlier comments and say that you might want to capitalize the beginnings ...

This was really good, especially for someone your age! I have only two things, though. In this section: "Rain drips onto my nose and face and tears mingle with fresh ...

This was extremely well written! It came across as very poetic, which was extremely beautiful. I'm actually quite envious of how talented you are! I found nothing wrong with this ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I see you're relatively new, so I hope you enjoy this website as much as I do! If you need any help, feel free ...

This was so beautifully written! All of the emotion was really well played out throughout the whole piece. Great work on that part! One thing that I would recommend, would ...