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I must say, I have no complaints for this story. I read the first part and now this part really adds to it. You see Mick's love for Kat even ...

Wow! That was so creepy. At first I thought that it was going to be this father that missed his daughter, but I was wrong. That gave me chills, seriously. ...

Hey! So, I'm going to review this. Maybe the other parts too, if you don't mind. This was a nice beginning, I liked it. So, cotton got a lot of ...

I think this is my 100th review. I'm not sure. But, if it is, consider yourself special! :) The first day of high school was always portrayed as a huge ...

Well, I guess I would recommend The Perks of Being A Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky. There is some stuff that is a little inappropriate. But, I'm thirteen and I read ...

Hey! I agree with all above comments. You said it was dry, but I don't really think so. The ending kept me wanting more and I really would enjoy knowing ...

Hey, lisalulu, I'm going to review this for you, today. I hate seeing zero reviews. :) Grammar and stuff Beth asked, stuffing her mouth with fries. I think you should ...

Hey, TeenQueen. I have to say I enjoyed this part a lot. Onto your review: The three friends were sitting by the lake, after school, which was a stone’s throw ...

Hi, Evangelinne! I'm going to review your story today. OK, I liked it, it was really interesting and I want to know what happens. However, I got kind of confused ...

Hey, alyssh! It's kind of my thing to review someone else's work if they review mine. So, here it goes: and the car was still an ocean of junk. I ...

Hey! Thanks for the PM. Again, I don't really see any grammar problems. So, that's good! I still really enjoyed reading this story. It's still really interesting. I guess, I ...

It was a cool morning,about [s]60[/s] sixty degrees out. A small band of mustangs were just waking from a good nights rest, stretching and getting ready for the day. A ...

Hey, Megan. Well, I'm not really good at critiquing poetry so I probably won't be any help whatsoever. But, since you asked, I'll just tell you that I liked it ...

Yeah, you reviewed my story, so I'll review yours. :) I walked down the stairs to where my mom was cooking bacon that I could hear sizzling. I think this ...

Hey, TeenQueen. This looked interesting so I thought I'd review it for you. :) Grammar Maybe he knew all along that a day would come when it would end this ...