methrirr123

I see what you did there... not really

Books often have many chapters :)

I will begin by saying that this is the 11th time trying and failing to write this chapter. please enjoy.

did it wierd you out? then it did exactly what it was supposed to.

It's a little short to warrant a long review, but I will say that I did like the verse, and can definitely imagine it with music!

Get well soon. and yeah, PM me about anything you need reviewed.

I'll say it once, I'll say it again, read the other two parts

I am faced with this overwhelming block of text, which I guess must be the work of the classic copy paste scenario. But seriously, this is by far the most ...

This is an amazing piece, expertly written, and masterfully described. It belongs on a golden plaque somewhere. I will not even try to review it, as was my original plan. ...

the way I have it planned out, is that Rov. Sr is a bad guy. He gets worse and worse untill the reader starts to hate him. He corrupts this ...

and again, I gotta say, READ THE PROLOGUE.

I understand the whole tags thing, but hear me out when I say that, in the prologue, I had people bother me about two people having the same names, and ...

I have no problem with your language problem. Really, I could care less. I just think it takes away from a poem that would normally, as it seems, make someone ...

did you read the prologue? It's pretty important. I would recomend reading the prologue. It got one good review, and many complaints regarding grammatical errors, which I think are unimportant ...

BAAAGH I totally thought I fixed it. It was originally chapter one, but I made it a prologue. It annoys me how when you go to edit, it undoes previous ...