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I corrected that shortly after Kameron's review.

Hope isn't realistic, and that's what I tried to portray in this poem, as well as realizing how few the number of your true friends may be. And thanks for ...

Nice Poem!

I use the word 'rent' as passed tense for the word 'rend' meaning to slice, cut, or tear. Sorry for any confusion.

Dear god this review must've been worth at least a million points.

Not gonna lie, I did NOT no you were a hunter. That is SO cool. :D

such thoughts may spoil the plot

... I hope you can understand why I didn't take this review seriously, seeing as how you didn't even read past the first few sentences.

Not everything written can be brilliant. Keep this in mind, reviewers xD

BLAAAARGH TENSE SHIFTING xD I made a concious effort to not do that, since it was originally written in present tense.

I was given as much insight to it as you were. If it were me, I would have written a novel. I also found it ironic how, as I read ...

silly becki. Nobody lives in my mind. The rent is two damn high. XD

may I point out that this was written two years ago? meaning, two years of experience was NOT THERE for when this was written? I literally found it, and slammed ...

the thing that I find conflicting with regards to detail is the fact that it's a first person narration from the perspective of a zombie, who even in life was ...

I won't be able to write any sort of review untill I actually hear it, but I like the song that played in my head while I read it, so, ...