methrirr123

Hello there! I see that in this piece there is a message. I also notice that it's an apocalypse poem. I like how you seem to be asking the reader, ...

21 times. You used the word "fuck" or "fucking" 21 times. Now I'm no poet, but in any poem, I find it a bit annoying when ANY word is used ...

A wise thing to keep in mind: "Do not over explain in a hundred pages that which can be understood in a sentence." This is not always the case, if ...

This piece is written with very descriptive language, and your use of the second person is very good. I comend you on the tone of the story also, the kind ...

Quite possibly the most beautiful language I have seen in a poem on this site in the days I've spent here. Not saying I've been here long. This paints a ...

Methrirr123, here to review. I have no problem with the story line. I really don't. But you seem to be forcing yourself to use a fantassy voice that shows predominantly ...

It is unique. I will go as far as to say that a poem has never instructed me to be a fart. It causes the phantom of the smell itself ...

This is an erie story, written with genuine emotion, and a very sad theme. It makes a reader feel, which is all you can hope for in a piece like ...

This is an erie story, written with genuine emotion, and a very sad theme. It makes a reader feel, which is all you can hope for in a piece like ...

as much as I like Warhammer, I fail to see the purpose of this piece. Nothing really happens. It's really just a string of dialogue between a few people who ...

Here to Review your piece, it's Methrirr123! Anyway, the story was great. I loved the ending. There were a good many run on's but they didn't ruin the story or ...

heartwarming. Causes the reader to feel sorrow, and happiness, and adoration all at once. This is a very good story, to say the least. To say the most would be ...