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Hey! Methrirr here for one of my rare reviews. At first glance, I may have thought it as boring. But, it's educational, and also a journal entry. I can realy ...

Hellooooo there. it's Methrirr, coming back to reviews after a long time of not doing them. I liked the prose part, the first part grabbing my attention with the imagery ...

Hello. Ethri has come to review your thingy, as requested. I really like it. I'm impressed with your pitch perfect depiction of a ten year old girl, and how nobody ...

Hello. First review in a while, so bare with me. I like this piece alot. It's a bit shorter than I would have liked, but It get's the message accross. ...

Hello there. I must begin by saying that this is a very good metaphor for life and it's inevitable conclusion. It's not so much a story as it is a ...

Hello Marcia! As promised, I read your story here. Lemme just start by saying that I liked it quite a bit. My problems with it are as follows: Not really ...

Hello there. I read your story. That's write, chalenge accepted, went and read the whole thing. I liked it, for the most part. I had few problems with it with ...

Hey there. I read your piece, and quite liked it. It has some serious sensory language, and some good content. However I did find the way you ended your lines ...

Hello there. I read your poem, and decided to review it, needless to say. I noticed you tried to make it rhyme, but it seems to me that, at least ...

Hello there. I read your piece, and I liked it. It had a kind of daunting feel to it. You weren't as descriptive as I would have liked, but a ...

Hello there. I read your chapter, and liked it. It was a bit short for a chapter, which normally ends in such a way that leaves the reader for want ...

Hey there! I read your story, And it was good. The voice you used was a good voice, though I thought it'd sound better in first person. It was paced ...

Hello there! I read your poem, and rather liked it. It was more than just a message, but almost a lesson. Your word choice is excelent, and you actually got ...

I liked your story. It was a bit fast paced for me, and oddly romantic. I also noticed that you could have been a little more descriptive. The sounds of ...

Hello there, ACHU. I see here a poem that seems to be about a mother who misses their child. I was a little confused with your sentence structure: "Days have ...