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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Long Way Lost

    Thank you for your wonderful review! I'll try my very best to get to your works :)

    Jul 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Diaboli (Red Velvet Chapter 1)

    Nah, I just noticed it while I was reading. I don't think it's really too much. Mhm, she is very very perfect. I'm really interested in seeing some of those ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Coda - Prologue

    Ohh, alright, now I see what you're saying.

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Coda - Prologue

    Thank you for liking my story! And the next chapter is up in the moment, since you wanted to know. (I'm a bit confused about the part where you mention ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Dream Maker : Chapter Two

    Hey! Haha, wow, thank you so much that you're liking this, I didn't really think that people would like it. I think I'll be updating more chapters soon, so keep ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Gray : Present Four

    Thank you so much for your review! As I read it, yes, I feel that I should definitely fix that issue... I wanted to focus more on the small things ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Horror Re: The Parasite of Summer

    Thank you so much! And don't worry about it, I love critiques, and your review is simply amazing :) Yeah... I should probably work on this story a lot. Thank ...

    Feb 24, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Edward Cullen is UGLY!

    Hey, @Urba. I just read this story, scrolled down, and saw your review. And I hope that I'm not going to sound really mean. But if you didn't like this, ...

    Feb 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Pale Wizard

    Hey! I'm so sorry, I don't know why I didn't see your question before. Although there'll be more stories about wizards, I don't think that they'll follow this particular universe ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Past One

    Yep! So the fairytale that you reviewed was like, the sum-up version of this book 'Gray', with a lot of things and characters that I changed. Thanks for providing your ...

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Present Two

    Hey! Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I would like to touch upon the subject of magic, if I may. I've thought of it out, so that every magic requires a price, ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Present Two

    Hey! Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I would like to touch upon the subject of magic, if I may. I've thought of it out, so that every magic requires a price, ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Gray Fairytale

    Hey! Oh, good god, thank you so much. I'll take all of feedback into my editing process. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your review was incredibly detailed and helpful. ...

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Present One

    Yep, I did! I felt like I needed to fix some crucial things... Did it get worse? :(

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ennui

    Ohhhh, ok. I understand your question now. I just included that dialogue to make it seem, you know, like a casual conversation. There is absolutely no secret to the paper. ...

    Jan 26, 2015


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