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  • Poetry » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hey TiggaBiscuit! So, I kind of liked this poem but was kind of confused. I noticed that this was about bullying, cyber bullying, in fact, and I loved the way ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hey TigagaBiscuit! Soooooooooooo. Hmm. Interesting piece of literature! This certainly made the time before going to sleep a lot more interesting. Although, it would be more "Awesome to the max" ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: I've learned to hide my necklaces under my shirt

    Hey thebrightestfell! Wow, I really liked this piece of writing! The symbolism that the necklaces bear are really incredible. I've never thought about symbolism like this... Like, being able to ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Bad Drivers. (A Haiku.)

    Hey GreenLight24! I'm really beginning to LOVE haikus nowadays. I don't think that this would be a review, just a comment. There's nothing to fix, so... Haha. I really laughed ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: There She Sat

    Hey, Thewriter13! Wow, I have to say that this is a truly beautiful work. The imagery you create is wonderful and soothing. I liked it especially because I used to ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The difference

    Hey, MysteryMe! Wow! Another wonderful work by you! By now, I'm just going through your writings and knowing that this is going to make me feel so insignificant.. Never mind ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: At least I survived

    Hey, MysteryMe! I just really liked your other poem, You say, and I believe, so I came to see more of your works because I believe that they will be ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You say, and I believe.

    This is amazing. I was literally paralyzed after reading this, just open-mouthed and staring, trying to remember what I had read forever and ever so I would never forget this ...

    Jun 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Koala's Climb

    Hey Wolfare1! I liked this really much, but I'll just show you a few nitpicks, okay? But your poem is really great, trust me. First, a really tiny thing. First ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Fourth World: Ch5 Part 3

    Hey thegirlwhowrites! Happy review day, first of all! :) Okay. First, I haven't read any chapters of this story yet except for this one, so I'm sorry if any misunderstandings ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 4: Previous Tomfoolery

    Hey rawrafied! Happy review day!! :D So, let me just tell you that I haven't read your previous chapters yet, so this review might be a little misinformed. But, hey, ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet of a untrusting lover.

    Hey retrodisco, we meet again! :D Well, this was a great poem. It seems that you like (and are very talented at) writing love poems, yeah? :) I'll just tell ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bruise on My Heart

    Hey Aquestioning! A great poem you got there. I liked it. If I understood it correctly, it's about a boy or a girl losing his or her mom, right? Or ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Crap, I think I love you.

    Hey retrodisco666! As CholeAB also mentioned, you did a really good job at making this love poem not sound cliche. I could understand 'I' very, very well, because you created ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Lost.

    Hi chaninalexis14! First of all, wow. This story is really depressing, no offense, but really depressing. I felt so sad for the 'I' as I read on, because, wow, I ...

    Apr 7, 2014


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites