mellophone7

Oooohhh, I love this so much! This is exactly how I feel SO much of the time as a writer! Plus, you wrote it in free verse in a long, ...

I had a hard time getting into this poem. Maybe it was how long it was, or just the grammar in it. I kind of liked how you wrote it ...

Wow, this is so perfect! And completely true! I absolutely love it! I like how you covered all the questions and I especially like your line Love is indescribable. So ...

This is interesting, and it was so, so cool to read. I really enjoyed it. It's very well written. I really didn't notice any errors with it, although I kind ...

I made the mistake of having dark music playing in the background while reading this. :P It's interesting to see what you keep coming up with. The only thing I ...

I love this poem. And, yes, I was able to figure out what it was about. :) I love reading poems that rhyme, and this one had some really good ...

This is a really good poem that shows a lot of emotion. You did a very good job with writing it. I got completely wrapped up in it, and it's ...

Unbroken sorrow swan-scattered in a dice-throw— you outlive yourself. Unfortunately, I have to agree with dante93. There's hardly anything here. I know haiku are really short, but I don't understand

This was a good start, but I also felt that it was lacking something. This verbal portrait You've painted with soft words. I can see it right in front of ...

:) This poem made me smile. I always love seeing poems that personify things...like a question mark. :) Anyways, the only thing I wanted to comment on was that I ...

Okay. So, the poem was good but to admit, it was a little confusing. I agree with this; the only stanza that wasn't slightly confusing was the third one. But ...

I love this poem just about as much as I love clouds, which is a LOT. :) I just have a few suggestions to make. As they dash through the ...

Okay, me being a personal fan of this subject, I did like this poem, but I'll admit I expected something a little longer. As I believe one comment already stated, ...

Woooow....this is so incredibly beautiful. Such an amazingly written poem! The only comment I would make would be on the very last few lines. as you swing, ascending along an ...

Hm, I like this. You definitely captured the beauty of a horse, here. :) I do have some nitpicks, though. Time is frozen. The air is blowing through his thick ...