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Hey~ Okay, a lot happened in this chapter. I think this is good for your plot which was dragging before now. I think the reason you're getting so many complaints ...

Heyo~ Sherlock's finally doing something of interest! How exciting! I almost wish I had known about these kids sooner. Like, introduced one or two in the previous chapters. Maybe mention ...

Okeydoke~ What a cute little family you have there. I like their interactions. I can relate as an older sister xD I have to agree with some of your other ...

Heyo~ Back again though a day late >.> Oh well. Read through the other reviews. I'll try not to repeat. I think I like your bad guys better than your ...

Read the previous reviews. It's awesome that you have such loyal followers! Just a real quick mention. The existence of the restricted section is enough to evoke HP, renaming it ...

Hey~ Read the previous reviews. I'll try to avoid what was covered. If you don't want it to be obvious who Master is, cut that prologue. At this point it ...

Heyo~ Read through the reviews. Sorry if I repeat things~ I wouldn't worry about being very similar to HP. You can't deny the similarities, even with the edits. The fact ...

Hey yiz~ So, you asked me to review Chapter 7 in August, and I never got around to it because I'm really terrible at keeping up with my WRFF thread! ...

Heyo~ I'm finally getting to your novel after you requested in my thread a while ago! I'm sorry for the wait >.> You get the reader to connect with Lexxi ...

Hey! Here as requested after a few eons. I'm sorry for the late reply. I personally like the ending of this excerpt. It's abrupt and leaves you wondering what just ...

Hey! I'm finally getting around to reviewing your request. I'm sorry for the long wait. The tense along with your word choice and flow are really masterful. They make this ...

Hey Miss~ You weren't kidding when you said this was long! I'll get to all of it (especially now that I've made you wait an eon) but I'll have to ...

Heyo~ Finally finishing up your request. >.> I'm sorry again. I've read through everyone else's reviews, so I shouldn't repeat anything. We'll see. Wow. This chapter was a busy chapter, ...

Hey! I'm sorry for the wait >.> To make up for it, I'll review your second chapter too. I skimmed through the other reviews, and will try not to repeat ...

Hey~ This is for Big Review. I'm sorry for being late! Two quick nitpicks that I'm just going to get out of the way: And yet again, the creature hurdle ...