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Ay~ Let's see if I can finish this up by Review Day... These reviews are so long, so I'm just going to read the chapter, and review it myself. I'm ...

Here again~ What an interesting ending, and what an interesting relationship between Alex and Varsee. I was curious to see exactly what their relationship was going to play out as. ...

I'm so close to the end :o I think I could actually get this done in August? We'll say the end of fall. School's starting soon >.> Anyways. I really ...

Heyo~ You'll notice I didn’t review last chapter. There was really nothing for me to say. However, I feel like the cliffhanger at the end of these chapters has been ...

These two characters you've just added are lovely. I think they're both great additions. Your characterization is flawless as far as I'm concerned. I feel bad for Evie. I kinda ...

Hooooly crap! What??? This is an insane ride all of a sudden! I'm really pleased with the pacing of this chapter. I think we've bounced back from the slow parts! ...

Gah. Poor little Caius. I'm glad he's still around, and I'm glad we've finally got some action again. I think that's important. I mean... I think they're both unhealthily attached ...

The italics for all of the 18th chapter is kinda weird. I'm glad we've changed pace a little though again, I think 17 and 18 can be combined. I feel ...

I read the reviews, so I don't repeat anything, and they always get me so excited to read what's coming! I've been complaining about Evie's and Caius' relationship and how ...

Half way through! With what you've posted anyways xP That ending though. Holy cow. You've got the cliffhanger mastered, my friend. Man. These last few chapters have been practically flawless. ...

Hey Ganga~ I'm not really sure why this is split into two chapters. I think it would be just fine as one. It's obvious Evie fell asleep without the break ...

Okay. I'm just going to see how many of these I can get through today! I have determination~ Aw, bless Caius. Poor guy. He reacts just as someone really scared ...

Heyo~ So much for writing a review a day -_- I'm really going to try to get through soon though. Before I go back to school. Anyways. I love the ...

Ganga~ I'm going for team tortoise this month, so I may actually get through what you have posted here. Imagine that? Me going through something quickly. Unbelievable. I know I ...

Hey Ganga~ Very nice ending. I'm very impressed. This entire chapter was actually quite masterful. In fact, there's only one thing that really bothers me about it. Nico leaves when ...