meggy86

I don't have time for a full length review but I just had to say that this is a really great piece. There's a ton of action and realistic emotion ...

Thanks guys! And yeah, the poem does seem sort of shallow from a certain viewpoint. I was writing it more to describe how you feel when you have a crush ...

Well, I'm glad you like it and thanks for posting a reply! I really appreciate it. -Meggy

Sorry, I don't have time for a review but I would like to guess. It it time? Hopefully you let us know someday. Anyways, I really like it. It has ...

I love it! But is it over or is there going to be more? I couldn't quite tell.

I love it! I've got to agree with the others, though, I thought Lucas was at least 15 or 16. Still, I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!

I love it! =]

Thanks for all the input! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed reading it. I went back and tried to make the transition between the 7th and 8th stanza more clear ...

Thanks for the advice! I have to admit, I've actually never been on a plane in my life, so I was pretty much just making this all up. I probably ...

You're right, the plot is a little bit unclear but it sounds like its going to be a great story. The last few paragraphs really caught my attention and I ...

An onslaught of rain poured down from grey, lurking clouds above me as lightning bolts stridently lit the sky. This is fine as it is, but it might sound better ...

Dear FragileHeart, I love it! It has a sad ending but it's still amazing. You build great characters and develop an interesting plot in just a few paragraphs! Amazing! You've ...

I love it! Just watch out it doesn't get to Twilighty and cliche.

Good imagery! It's sort of confusing in some places, but pretty much everything I have to say is covered above. Oh, well.

I like it! You put a lot of emotion into it and even if the grammar isn't perfect its still pretty good.