megan17

Thank you so so much! I am happy to hear I surprised you in a good way.

Thank you so much! And I agree, bigger words would have made it a bit stronger.

Thank you! Your tips are very helpful, and where it says "exited" I meant excited. Whoops

Good to know, I will be sure to check them out!

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you for the advice! I did mean hide, definitely not die, whoops... I see your point with the change in emotion throughout the poem, I will look into better ...

No problem! The feeling is mutual.

This was so good! I felt it was really dramatic, in a good way of course. I could feel the pain the narrator was in in such a realistic way, ...

I love this! Very powerful :)

Thank you for your notes! I will be sure to add those commas in my final piece :)

Thank you! I'm excited to hear more from you :)

Thank you very much! I was a little worried about posting online, but I'm glad you liked it!