mcleo1

Thanks a lot for the review xD, I'll make sure to update sooner or later.

Thanks xD, Hey steggy

Oh yeah, also sorry about the unnecessary words. I need to make a hit list for those and start double checking lol.

Thanks for the review. Especially with the grammar :).

thanks, yours is cool to

sorry then, that works, :)

This is actually from a piece where it's about someone else not me. This is actually a character lol. But thanks for your criticism I realized it was quite random ...

Thanks for the review :) and it's a person that goes by the name society. So it's like they see it through there eyes so there will be bias but ...

Thank you :) I'm super bad at this technical stuff. I so need an article with the shortcuts lol

Nah, it's not that literal lol. Sorry. Things that I say in the poem aren't what they seem. Like green eyes are meant to represent jealousy because you know green ...

While I see your point, I'm fully aware that this is a confusing piece. I wasn't trying to mimic anyone actually. Or trying to make it grand, just when I ...

Oh wow sorry, I tried doing that while typing but I guess it didn't go through for the spacing. Really sorry about that but thanks for the review :)

Thank you, that really means a lot to me. :D

Thanks for the review again :D Sorry about the today thing, I sometimes tend to get ahead of myself when writing and forget about some things. I'll make sure to ...

Okay, I really really really like this. This concept is so interesting. I can't wait to read more. It's just a fun topic. I wish you didn't explain how they ...