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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: A Bridge

    Wowww I really enjoyed reading your poem... The topic is really interesting and it caught my attention really quickly. Especially, I really liked the ending. Keep up with the great ...

    Nov 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Thankful For Daddy

    This was really nice and touching... It almost made me cry. Thanks for sharing this story with us. It was a really important one that should be valued by everybody ...

    Nov 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: What Makes Me A Writer

    Hello there, First of all, I would like to say that I really liked this! The points you made here are really good and meaningful. I would like to tell ...

    Oct 23, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: That Last Drop of Coffee

    Ohh, this story made me sad :((( Really wonderful written, congratulations! But I saw few spelling and grammar errors, especially in paragraph three. It's just a friendly reminder for you ...

    Oct 20, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Shakespeare

    Shakespeare and beautiful??? hmmm, think about it again :D and a really good question you have, because I have been wondering this too, since I hate shakespearean plays and I ...

    Oct 19, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Father and son

    This dialogue, as I would call, is pretty short and simple, but it is really meaningful at the same time... The topic you chose is really interesting and the ending ...

    Oct 19, 2012
  • Script » Film, Humor Re: Snow White Parody Play

    Really nice and enjoyable parody... I love parodies and this made me smile! :) I liked the way the prince calls snow white "dude" :) Though, I think that you ...

    Oct 18, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The sun sets, but it's a new day

    I really, really enjoyed reading this... I see that you are so talented :) Keep up with this work and good luck with writing your next poems... I am looking ...

    Oct 17, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Dear Diary?

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this... First of all, I would say don't worry about the friend that you hate... It's high school, yes, and we all have similar problems... ...

    Oct 17, 2012


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