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This was so helpful, Kaos. Thanks for the advice! I'll keep working on this one. :) -mav

Thank you for the advice Rose. I appreciate your thoughts on this. Have a great day! :) -mav

Awesome! I'll keep an eye out! :)

Hi @deeproses, We meet again! Thank you for your constructive review of my piece. I really appreciate your honesty. You are right; it does drag. I hadn't noticed that as ...

Hello @DrThomas, I'd firstly like to compliment you on your profile image. I LOVED Rapunzel. :) Thank you for your wonderfully constructive review of my poem. I knew something about ...

Hi @AshleyDashley! I'm sorry, I only just saw this message! I'd love to collaborate with you on a project! I took a look at your portfolio and particularly enjoyed your ...

Hi @bigbad1993! This is one of the most useful critiques I've ever received. For that, I thank you. I had the same thought about the 'ice cream' line as I ...

You are so sweet, @AshleyDashley! Thank you so much for the kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and really appreciate your thoughts. I'll be sure to follow you, ...

Hi @GG4560! Thank you so much for the kind and encouraging review! I'm glad you were able to relate to my feelings, though I am sorry to hear that your ...

Hello @Dracula, Thank you for the review! I appreciate your thoughts and encouragement on this piece. Have a great day! :) -mav Mavis Knightley

Hi @Casanova, I really appreciate your thoughts on this piece! Firstly, to answer your query about my 'message' in the lyrics, there kind of wasn't one. I just... wrote? I ...

Hello WeirdGrace, Firstly, I'd like to compliment you on your username. It's very cute, and memorable! :) Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading my piece. ...

Hello Dracula, Thank you so much for your kind feedback! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece. I'll be sure to take a look at the 'email' sentence advisory. ...

Hello TheSilverFox, What wonderful feedback for a writer to receive! Thank you so much for your enthusiastic and encouraging review. I was a bit worried, this being my first flash-fiction ...