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Loved the voice. Very natural. Loved the message, it definitely is true. Kind of the same with all holidays! I'd clean up the missing apostrophes, spaces, and capitalization, but I'll ...

Hey there! This poem really caught my interest. We're working with someone/something called "Glass girl" and jellybeans. Very unique. The flow is nice; I like your voice a lot, very ...

Cleverly hilarious and unique. Perhaps two of my favorite qualities in writing. :-) The only question I had that didn't get answer is how old Adam is. As others commented, ...

I have to say I really liked this. The words you used and voice really stood out to me, and as said I really liked the last stanza and how ...

Your poem is unique and that is what I like about it. I think adding a bit more to it and explaining more about why you can't understand time would ...

You definitely made some good points that I totally connected to but I agree with maryletsflyaway. I don't really see a point to it, other than it's truth. Whenever I ...

I liked the similies you used! Very intelligent for a 2nd or 1st grader sheesh, you may even be smarter than your own parents. ;) This is very cute though. ...

This was really unique, I've never read a poem about the Boston Tea Party!! This was clever, a couple comments is I don't think 'galore' really fits, I don't know ...

This was an intriguing story, I absolutely loved the beginning paragraph about the hands! It really got my attention. Although the beginning scene did seem to be a bit cliché, ...

I thought this was a cute poem, a bit vague and not very descriptive like others have mentioned, blah blah blah. But it is definitely cliche, even the title alone. ...

Hello! There is a couple things that bugged me like... In this moment Of my torment I agree with Eimear, if you could find a different word to rhyme it ...

Hi! Sean Gordon sat in his tree house with his two brothers Connor and Max. This is just a suggestion, but this is the first sentence of your story and ...

Wow, this is almost as amazing as your Obama poster. :D This is really good! I love the funny things you throw in, like the cat eating teacher. I loved ...

Keep going with this!!! Please!! I am needing to read more. :) I like this a lot, it's really good. Frank made me laugh with his little menstruating comment. I ...

First off, I agree with TL G-Wooster that the beginning is pretty simple and nothing that really draws you in. When you talked about the birth, it sounded like it ...