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The review was vague.

Wow.

Nice choice on the genre.

I really like this. I had this attitude about poetry for a very long time! Ha, honestly I think a lot of poetry is just terrible, but this is actually ...

Wow. Thank you for the kind of review! I have never been met with such generosity on this site before. I really appreciated your honesty, but I find as if ...

Snoink your so observant! After rereading this piece however many years later I realized this character only wanted to sex him out!

This is good. I can definitely relate to a few of the things you are describing here. First off, I would like to start by commenting on the last line ...

To be clear, I am talking about two very different people in this poem. There is the she that woke up and died, and then there is the you, or ...

Oh! After I posted this I felt like it was awfully negative, so I just wanted to say that I really did enjoy your play with form here. I am ...

IM DRUNK AND A BITCH AND IM DRUNK

Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks for the review!

I remember writing a poem very similar to this several years ago. I really love the concept but the formatting is a little off and the phrasing almost seem chunky, ...

This poem is really well written. I definitely agree that happiness is hardest to find for those who seek it most. I definitely think that this is man's greatest struggle. ...

This is beautiful. You are really good at setting the scene and making what you are trying to say very clear to your audience. Great work. :)