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Re: Where it only gets Better
You write songs! You sing songs! And play guitar along it !! *impressed* P.S. D'you know, that you have a baritone ?? Like those old-time singers (e.g. Paul Anka, Cliff ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Tease Her
Well hello there !! Hmm, I should say, upon imagining the poem, like 'literally', it's really painful. So secretjournalist, it was a good poem overall. I only had one issue, ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Gangster's Girl
Well hello there ! I love the title ! Gangster's girl, yeah sounds so cool
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: The day
Hi ! Well you just reviewed a poem of mine and I happened to find yours in the green room. First of all, you deserve appreciation because writing at 13 ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages
Hey Pan! It's always a pleasure to read your stories. I totally adore the idea of personifying a fictional character. Though I may sound a little surreal, but it's somewhat ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
I'm not so certain about how to review your poem, because I believe you write the poems that sound the most sensible and enchanting to me. There's no specific part ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: Reading is My Remedy
Definitely, reading is a remedy. Hi ! Here's my review regarding this poem. It was a sweet and simple poem, I liked it. You were very straight with theme, I ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: In the beginning Snippet
Hi NerdBird! Firstly, I want to tell you that I love your username. It's so cute :) Now, coming to the point, i.e. my review on your story. I love ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: They Fall, Themselves
Hi Beth! Following is my review. I adored this haunting style with which you presented your poem. I somehow connect with it, and it seems like you reflected my feelings ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Scarf
Hey! Here's my review on your poem. This is one of the most marvelous poems I have ever read. You described your emotions regarding the gift so beautifully, it almost ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: My Journey
This is a great piece of poetry. I totally enjoyed it. Especially the lines below I move Towards it, My muscles are Burning. Skin shredded, Peeling a bit, And my ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Cloud Eight and Three Quarters
A very good piece of poetry it is. I love alliterations in poems and I'm glad your poem sounds great to read out loud because of those beautiful alliterations in ...
Dec 9, 2013
