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I guess I wanted to write something different from how I usually write. Nah, thanks for the blunt review! It makes want to work on it and make it better. ...

Holysocks! This was great! I have nothing to review so I'll just leave this as a comment. I think that pillows need cases because they're scared of the dark, and ...

But it does tell a story :/

HIYA. That was really good! The ballad had really good flow! I did, alas, Learn one new thing: A man's last breath Can hours bring. Love these lines!

Hey. You can see her struggle with all the blows life throws at us in her words. Its beautiful! Poems are a great way to channel your emotions.

I guess boredom inspires :) Thank you for the comment!

I just saw this now:O "The problem with lots and lots of people writing about them is that they usually take up all the good words first, and when we ...

Thank you so much Teen!

You mean Tommy? Maybe its hard to relate to him as we hear only from the brother.

Oh! XD And I said the ending makes me hate Tommy more! Though I don't see why I would dislike the brother.

Thanks for letting me know you got confused when he called himself a monster! I was worried I got carried away without giving the reader information. I will get to ...

Why would you say that?!?

I like the idea of putting exclamations at the end of the 'slaps'. Thank you so much!

Thank you Winter!

Thanks!