...Well, that escalated quickly. Anyway, I'll just speed through this one too, since I'm sure you've heard more than enough from reviewers like myself. Well, let's get down to business, shall we?
Gummy's my name, reviewing's my game! Tonight, I'm going to review... "Arachnid", by Letiki!
I really liked your diction and the use of language not commonly used in vernacular to not only fit the syllable count, but also to give the speaker an eloquent way of speaking. I commend you for this, and for the constant feeling of zoom-in and zoom-out the piece made me feel throughout my read.
One thing I couldn't quite grasp was the size of the accursed creature. I'm pretty sure it's me, but, for one second, I thought the spider was huge enough to swallow the speaker whole! XD I guess that's what happens when you're zooming in and zooming out so much...
I love fixed-verse poetry, so you can guess this was a great read for me. I seriously hope to read more from you in the near future, and, as always, take care. Remember: Practice is key!
Points: 5430
Reviews: 88
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