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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest

    You should be. Are you marking the reviews as a review? You see that "Is that a review?" button below of the text space? Are you marking that as yes ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: Going through Time-Chapter One: The Beginning of Our Quest

    Oops. I never put in the link!

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: !

    And you did a great job too!

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: !

    What was the name of the chapter? I want to try reading it in its original format. Your writing has made me very curious. Ah engineering :/ Actually, you will ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 3 Part 1

    I suggest you continue. Think of it as first draft. Jot down the suggestions others give and use it later on. Right now, aim to complete the story. Restarting, in ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 3 Part 1

    Lol

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bad things happen in slow motion

    I decided to right really short poems for this years NaPo so I didn't think about the length :/ Also, I was just talking about slow motion but didn't want ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bad things happen in slow motion

    Hi there! Thank you for the review! It really helped. but the most longest was I see what you mean here! I'll fix it right away. reflecting the face of ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Health Re: An unrealistic and very happy story about ants.

    A tear flickers down this reviewer's cheek as he recalls the emotional baggage this short story imbues on him. It is surely one that he will remember for as long ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Chapter 2 - Home

    Line breakers are simple. If its a scene change you could go with- ____________________________________________ or * * * Here, its a recollection she is having. You don't necessarily have to ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: One Last 'Hurrah!'

    Hi! Fitting poem to end the year! A new life shall be born with the early light. A new person will stand in the same shoes. Favorite lines! Happy new ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I need to kill.

    Thank you for the review!

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I need to kill.

    Sure, I'll review it for you! Thank you for your review!

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I need to kill.

    Glad you enjoyed it :D

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I need to kill.

    Thank you Mystery!

    Dec 29, 2013


When a flower doesn't bloom, you fix the environment in which it grows, not the flower.
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