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Greetings Hayley. manisha here to review! Firstly, I liked this. You have a good writing style. I also loved the concept you are trying to convey. How the world sees ...

Hulla! You have definitely nailed the horror part to this story. You have shown(not tell, which is very good) the psychopathic mindset of the killer very well. The story about ...

"Great. I suppose you're wondering if what he was talking about true." This is oddly structured. It should go like this- Great. I suppose you're wondering if what he was ...

Hi there! manisha here to review. Firstly, this was a good try. Except for a few typos and confusing sentences, the good has potential. "The dark was enveloped him. He ...

Hey there Kay! I've been following the novel because I really like the previous chapters. This chapter had a lot of information and very little detail and sometimes that got ...

Hi there! Happy review day! I drop here thinking I could read it and give you a well deserved review, but honestly I couldn't go on. I am really sorry ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day to you! Firstly, I haven't read the previous chapters so whatever I try to review will be based on this chapter only. Actually I'm going ...

Hey there Twinkle! Happy Review Day to you! So I haven't read the previous chapters so whatever I say will be for this chapter only. Just lying out there under ...

Hi there! Happy review day to you! I haven't read the previous chapters so whatever I say will do with this chapter alone. And I apologize for not reading the ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! Cute avatar by the way! I see this is your first post. Congratulations. You say this is a novel so is this something like a ...

Hey there! HAppy Review Day to you! I haven't read the previous chapters, so my review will be based only on this chapter as I have no idea about what ...

Hi! Happy Review day! I haven't read chapter 1, but this chapter itself was great. Even though I have no idea about the protagonist or the Dreamcatcher or who the ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! This was a good prologue. You set the mood, the setting very well. Max and Micki were twins, the ages of 17, and with Micki ...

Hi there! Happy Review day to you! manisha here to review! Firstly, I know nothing about horses! I absolutely love horses and want to own one, but I know nothing ...

Hi there! Are you actually ten?I though YWS didn't accept anyone below 13. Anyway, to the review. This is a really cute story but you need to work very hard ...