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Re: Kira's Story, Chapter 1
Hi you! Happy Review Day! manisha here to review for Team Rouge. The Green Room is filled with your works so I decided to review them all(If I can ) ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: GemsWorld Quest Chapter 5: The Master Scheme
Hi again! Finally, the Cyfer being put to use. I'll review as I read. I find it strange that Dyrow has no eye for anyone except Crystial. I just realized ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Aye, Aye Captain
Hi there! Happy review day to you! This was a very good read. I love pirates and enjoyed reading about them. There were a few grammatical mistakes that need tweaking. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: At My Sister's
Hi there! Happy Review Day. Manisha here to review for Team Rouge. Hahaha, I love it ! You have an unique style of writing which had me reading every word ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: GemsWorld Quest Chapter 4: Preparation Time!
Hi there Tortwag! Manisha here to review! HAppy Review Day. Go Team Rouge. I'll review as I read. In the previous chapter explained what Cyfer was. There wasn't much going ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Living on a prayer
Hi you! It is a very narrative song so it's great the way you have tried to incorporate your own individuality in the short. I like the way you have ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: GemsWorld Quest Chapter 3: Journey to the center of the mind
Hi you! manisha here to review:) Thanks for the link! This chapter had more of conversation than action Is this the first time we are introduced to Dyrow's mother?( please ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Gossip Girl
Hi there! Um...well, there isn't must to review here really! Anger floods my body. Why? How? What did I ever do to them? Why tell my secrets? In my mind’s ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: New Found Freedom!
Hello dearie girl! manisha here to review for Green Lantern! I'll review as I read. What if I copy from the paper beside mine? Maybe the person knew the answer? ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Devil In Me
Hi Shiksha! manisha here to review for review day! I'll review as I read. I was sweating badly. I stared into the mirror; at my face. I would suggest a ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: That time in the kitchen
Hi you! manisha here to review for review day! Firstly, separate the dialogues if the speaker is different. It goes easy on the eyes and easier for the reader to ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Real American Woman, ch. 2
Hi again! I saw this first, then I went back to read chapter 1 and I'm back here again! To the reviewing- That was heaven…a circus that is almost an ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Real American Woman, ch. 3
Ayumi! manisha here for chapter three! I'm kinda lost now. In the before chapter Audra talks about how passionate she is about theater. Here we hear that bio med is ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Seed
Hi reader! Happy Review day to you! manisha here for Green Lantern! Firstly, let me tell you how much I love the video To This Day. Shane has done an ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Real American Woman, ch. 1
Hi there Ayumi! manisha here to review! Firstly, I love the fact that this is a story about a simple woman facing problems in her life. In a big world ...
Aug 25, 2013
