manisha

Hey there Reader! I'm a fan of Greek mythology so I really liked this. Its a well detailed piece which is written very well, however I find your first paragraph ...

Hi Lovelace! This was a great story! Beautifully written. I also like the way you have structured the story so it looks like a poem and also sounds like one. ...

Hey there! I absolutely love it! I liked the way you started the story, describing the relation between a car and a driver. It has great description and excellent dialogue. ...

Hey there! Secret santa to review again. Happy July Christmas! Please ignore any typos for I'm doing this on my cell. As soon as I saw it I felt it ...

Hey there! I'm manisha and I'm your secret santa for Christmas is July. So this is the special review! Firstly, great prologue. Many readers usually skip prologue in books and ...

Hey there! Manisha here to review. I'll keep it short for I'm doing it using my cell phone. Please ignore any typos. As dreams go this certainly is a great ...

Hello there! I loved the story and the whole concept! The music was the most strongest point of the story and also very well put forward. “Well are you?” A ...

Hey there! I'm going to say I loved this piece! Love the way you started it off, playing around with colors. The story gripped me and I enjoyed reading every ...

When I saw this in the green room and went back and read the first part. You had done a great job there, and no less here. You have great ...

Hello Deanz! I love the title! It does the story justice. The story reminded me of Black Swan, though the concepts are different. Alright, to the story. It was poetic ...

Hey Chance, I like the way you wrote this. The plots good too. the only thing I have a problem with is the beginning. It was a bright sunny morning. ...

Hey there! Firstly I liked the story, it was a good attempt. I like the introduction to Parvati, I see you are trying to make the reader connect to her. ...

Hey Chance, I like the way you wrote this. The plots good too. the only thing I have a problem with is the beginning. It was a bright sunny morning. ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day. Alright, firstly I'll say that I absolutely loved the setting you so well described. You writing itself is great and I couldn't find any grammatical ...

Hey there Rithik! manisha here to review. I see this is your first post on YWS. Firstly, I see potential in your writing. But you must really work hard. I ...