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Hello, Becky! These lyrics are pretty good, they have a really great message. I love the line, "like JLopez said, Make Love Don't Fight!". It kinda takes away from the ...

Hello! This piece sure is unique. Overall I guess it is a cute little story. It doesn't have much point to it but I suppose thats how you meant it ...

Hello, Enflicted. This poem is very well written. I love the line, "My mind tells me to leave, but you're holding me here". It really conveys the whole theme of ...

The whole reason why I posted it here was for editing; this is a piece that is not edited well yet and definitely not finished. Also, everyone has there own ...

Thank-you so much for reviewing my short story, its just what I needed! The reason why its so fast paced is because its supposed to be a "short" story and ...

Very neat twist, I really like it. Good description and just all around a great piece of writing. Keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. Keep writing!

Very good piece of writing, the way you made it sound and how you perceived the whole thing is great. I really can't find anything i would change about it! ...

A few grammatical errors, very, very good though. Amazing description and just really great!