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Re: I'm sorry, if you ever even see
Hello! This is a great poem! It's very relate able and clearly has lots of thought behind it. I actually just went through something very simaler to the situation described ...
Aug 22, 2018 -
Re: Starlight, Star Bright
Hello! Very well done on this short poem! It’s very sweet, and defiantly sounds like something I would tell my little sister at bedtime. I also agree with the other ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: Departed Yet Still Here
Hello! This was a beautiful poem! I can tell from reading this poem that your grandmother must have been very loving and sweet. Personally, I think that it was a ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: The Silver Queen
Hello! This poem is absolutely amazing! It’s a very creative and exprecive way to describe the moon. I’ve never actually thought of the moon as a ‘Silver Queen’ before unroll ...
Jul 22, 2018 -
Re: Broken Pieces
Hey! This was a great poem in my my opinion. There were defiantly a few things that were off about it. I would defiantly refer back to the two reviews ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Suicide note
Hey! This was definitely a great read. Especially as someone who has actually experienced some of this. I can tell you that you hit the nail spot on with all ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Waiting
Hello! I think you did a very good job on this poem. You made a good representation of what could be going on in an animals head when hunting season ...
Jul 3, 2018 -
Re: Before she is gone
Hello! This poem is absolutely breath taking! I can't stop reading it because its just so sweet and relate able. In the first part, "She stands motionless on the black ...
Jul 3, 2018 -
Re: When will it stop
Hello! I read your poem and overall I think it's amazing. As someone who deals with this every day you portrade the aspects of pain and running around in circles ...
Jul 2, 2018
