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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: October 12th. New beginnings

    Thank you for taking the time to write this review. I truly appreciate your efforts to delve into the content. I may write chaotically, but I welcome criticism; whether I ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "dear god" by Xaney

    This poetry was amazing; the way you depict how your siblings perceive your father in comparison to you is quite expressive. It's a very personal article, which says a lot ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Echoes

    Amazing work. "Craving you like a fool Like it meant something to you Playing it all cool Cause that is what you do This will not work now, your way ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: draft of a short story

    I adore this, and I do think you should continue. Suspense is one of my favorites, and I'm definitely sensing it here.

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: draft of a short story

    I adore this, and I do think you should continue. Suspense is one of my favorites, and I'm definitely sensing it here.

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Scatterbrained

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    This poem has struck a chord of resonance with me like no other. I can fully relate to its message and the emotions it presents. As a young person coming ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Scatterbrained

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    This poem has struck a chord of resonance with me like no other. I can fully relate to its message and the emotions it presents. As a young person coming ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Listen or turn away..

    “Silence is golden; I knew of no-one who’d try to engage or talk to me. Do you ever feel like people pass through you?” I felt this on another level. ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: Mis ojos, mi amor

    I love first person writing a lot! I love it even more when people can really put the passion in first person writing. When they get the intensity correct it ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: a love too soon

    Yesss I love this.

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Frozen Lake

    This poem is deep, and has a deep meaning behind it. I understand it so well.

    Oct 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: down the drain

    Oct 14, 2023


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