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Re: October 12th. New beginnings
Thank you for taking the time to write this review. I truly appreciate your efforts to delve into the content. I may write chaotically, but I welcome criticism; whether I ...
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Re: "dear god" by Xaney
This poetry was amazing; the way you depict how your siblings perceive your father in comparison to you is quite expressive. It's a very personal article, which says a lot ...
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Re: Echoes
Amazing work. "Craving you like a fool Like it meant something to you Playing it all cool Cause that is what you do This will not work now, your way ...
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: draft of a short story
I adore this, and I do think you should continue. Suspense is one of my favorites, and I'm definitely sensing it here.
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: draft of a short story
I adore this, and I do think you should continue. Suspense is one of my favorites, and I'm definitely sensing it here.
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: Scatterbrained
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Oct 20, 2023
This poem has struck a chord of resonance with me like no other. I can fully relate to its message and the emotions it presents. As a young person coming ... -
Re: Scatterbrained
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Oct 20, 2023
This poem has struck a chord of resonance with me like no other. I can fully relate to its message and the emotions it presents. As a young person coming ... -
Re: Listen or turn away..
“Silence is golden; I knew of no-one who’d try to engage or talk to me. Do you ever feel like people pass through you?” I felt this on another level. ...
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Re: Mis ojos, mi amor
I love first person writing a lot! I love it even more when people can really put the passion in first person writing. When they get the intensity correct it ...
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Re: a love too soon
Yesss I love this.
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Re: Frozen Lake
This poem is deep, and has a deep meaning behind it. I understand it so well.
Oct 14, 2023 - Re: down the drain Oct 14, 2023
