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Hello there, Shadow Princess, and welcome to YWS!! Now this was looking a little lonely so I just had to check it out and give your wonderful piece of writing ...

Hi, ash!! I'm loving how the chapters keep on coming and coming!! :D. I haven't read through Sunny's review, so if I repeat anything, I apologise in advance (: So, ...

Hi there, Dudette, I'm here to review your piece, as it's looking a little lonely at the moment. So, all my comments will be in bold and [] , and ...

Hi Imp (can I call you that?), nice to meet you *waves* :D. In my search for something to critique, I glanced over this, which was looking a little lonely, ...

Ooh, I liked this chapter; it was very different, and, of course, brilliant!! Seeing as Sunny and Angel have done the nit-picks etc, I have nothing left to say except ...

Heyy, Sunny!! =D Now the war has finally ended, what better way for me to celebrate than to review a piece of your wonderful work!! It was also looking a ...

Hi, ash :smt039 :D . Sorry I've taken so long to get to reading this, but I'm taking a short break from greeting, waiting *hopefully* for new members to join. ...

Ashleylee (hehe, it is a great nickname :wink: ), I nearly thought that you'd abandoned this totally, but luckily for you, you decided to continue it *grins evily* haha :D ...

Heyy there, Em, I am here as requested and this is your second review for this piece!! *high fives* :backtotopic: Anywhooo, back to the serious business, I've enclosed a word ...

Here I am as requested!! (: I haven't read any of the above reviews, so sorry if I repeat anything (: . All my comments/suggestions and edits will be in ...

Here I am as requested, I hope this review helps you out, and all my comments/edits will be in bold. I also haven't looked at the other reviews so I ...

Heyy there, I've decided to review your piece as it seems a little lonely at the moment (: . I can see that this is the third chapter so I ...

Here I am as you requested :D, and it seems the first review since you last edited it, so I really hope this helps you out!! (: As always, all ...

Heyy, I'm randomly looking around for pieces of work that haven't been critiqued much, and as this has only one review as of yet, I figured you might want another, ...

Hi there!! This seemed pretty lonely to me, so I'm here to review your piece of work (: You said you wanted people to focus on your grammar etc, which ...