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To begin with, I'd like to say that this is a very compelling story. I like your descriptive language, and the symbolism adds a nice layer of meaning to the ...

I'm really fond of this, conceptually and in terms of your execution. However, because I'm nitpicky, well... be prepared for some nitpicking. "I can see it only a few hundred ...

This is definitely bone-chilling, and fulfills the promise in the description of "real life horror". I would definitely agree with you on the assertion that real life horror is of ...

Before beginning this review, I'll offer a full disclaimer: I am completely and utterly biased in your favor, just by virtue of the fact that this is a poem about ...

Perhaps this is a bit of a preference on my part, but in future, I'd recommend that you avoid putting commentary in the body of your story. That being said, ...

I'd like to begin this review with the things I enjoyed about this story, so, without further ado, here's a (by no means completely comprehensive) list. Your descriptions are really ...

This poem is really interesting conceptually, and is, for the most part, very well executed. However, there are a few instances of imagery that feel somewhat out of place in ...

This seems to be a pretty interesting story, with a relatively original idea. I'm also finding myself being drawn to your main character - so many first-person narrators have a ...

I love the imagery you're working with here, especially since you've utilized it so well. Whether or not it was intentional, the mundane yet tumultuous events of the poem provide ...

This is a really lovely, poignant piece. Speaking from the perspective of someone who's lost a loved one, you've captured the anguish that comes along with it in passages like ...

Hello there! The first thing I'd like to do is congratulate you on your worldbuilding. From your species to your religions to the absolutely stunning development of cultures, the worldbuilding ...

I'd like to begin the review by saying that this is a lovely poem. Your use of imagery is, for the most part, a seamless blend of surreal and familiar, ...

This is a charming story! You've really captured the feel of children taking Hide an' Go Seek - I know for a fact that it felt like a death match ...

This an incredibly intriguing poem. I'm very fond of the novel on which this poem is based, and I think that you've captured the feelings, the pathos, if you will, ...

I've read over all of your poems, and I have to say that this is my favorite so far. The imagery is simple and charming, and you have a lovely ...