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Awww! I wasn't really quite sure how I wanted the effect to be to the reader from the poem but I guess I wanted it to be like you described ...

Thanks! It really means a lot to me. My friend actually was the one who went through this and it just made me really sad that she had lost someone ...

This was actually really old!! I wrote this when I was thirteen and, looking back now, I totally agree with what you said. Thanks so much for the tips!! :)

Good job! I think, like everyone else who read this, that this was relatable. I personally believe that this has happened to everyone at one point in time. I know ...

forget to tell you... Love the title! I have so much trouble coming up with a title that is only half as good as yours!

Good job! I think, like everyone else who read this, that this was relatable. I personally believe that this has happened to everyone at one point in time. I know ...

That was good! Great actually I misread the first verse you can always switch the wordsvoutborvreplace I love how you used embryonic! Definetly adding it to my favorite words list. ...

I feel as if the topic has been overused but then again I already have a weird dislike and like for this genre but I know for certain that my ...

The idea is good but I would recommend that you put some more to it. You can always add more substance and voice to your topic You could express times ...

amazing poem. it flows nicely (I have troubles with that.) and it was well thought out. oh yeah, and GOOD LUCK!!!