lovethemusic

Hmm. Okay. I liked this poem, especially the idea behind it, but I also think you're toeing the line between "good" and "stereotypical", and I almost think that you're edging ...

Oh, wow. That's cool. Maybe it's just because I like fantasy worlds and imaginary places, but I love this poem. There is incredible word choice and description in here. I ...

This was very good. I loved the ways that you described winter. It was wonderfully refreshing and beautiful. However, I do have two things to note. "Silent as a mournings ...

This is good. I love the comparison between "sun showers" and humans. Both nature's and humans' way of trying to act happy, but sadness still shows. I only noticed one ...

This is an amazing poem. I love all of the descriptions that you use. You described a rainy, misty forest perfectly. I was able to get very clear images in ...

Overall, I like this poem. It's interesting how it takes something that would normally be comforting (like home) and turns it into something strange and confining. You did a very ...

This....is....cool. It definitely has an alluring quality to it. Your choice of words in this poem was amazing, and it made everything flow very well. I only noticed one tiny, ...

I think that this is a really good poem. Granted, there are always things that can be improved upon, but the reason this caught my eye is because of the ...