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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Alternative Ending to "The Lady or the Tiger?"

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! You used a lot of imagination and the story was just creative and simply brilliant. Everything was great, except for the very ending: Thank ...

    Fri May 06, 2011 12:47 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 0

    Hi! So I am here to review again! I love this poem so very much because it is mysterious and scary, so here are some of my favorite parts: When ...

    Thu May 05, 2011 12:10 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: 0

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, it was beautiful and truthful. The length was wonderful and the title was gripping as well as the beginning paragraph. If you can create ...

    Wed May 04, 2011 11:59 pm
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 0

    Hi! Wow, I love your writing! I adore your creativity and am so jealous of it! I didn't notice anythign wrong with your grammer and punctuation. I really enjoyed reading ...

    Wed May 04, 2011 11:52 pm
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Effect

    Hi! I loved loved loved it! You did an amazing job! You used the perfect amount of detail and the writing was creative and kept me on my toes! I ...

    Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:50 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)

    Hi! I'm back! So I really really really enjoyed reading this! I liked this one so much and I love the way you write, the vocab and the analogies you ...

    Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:27 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fragile

    Hi! this was a creative peice and I really enjoyed reading it! I cannot believe that I am the second person to comment on this amazing story. I love the ...

    Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:58 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence

    Oh My God You did such an amazing job with this peice. I adored your analogies and especially the ending! I agree with you on everything and loved reading it! ...

    Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:47 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I've Got the Coffee Blues

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem - a lot! You did an amazing job, the rhyme sceme, the length, everything was brilliant. I am a huge coffee girl myself and ...

    Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:39 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Never-ending Quest for Love

    Hello! Wow, you did an amazing job! You are very creative with this peice and it was just plain out beautiful. I think you might have made it a little ...

    Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:35 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: So get out

    Hello! Wow this was a touching, amazing, and overall...beautiful. I give you props for the title, it was very capturing and it hooked my the minute I read it. I ...

    Wed Mar 02, 2011 1:31 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Face of Fear

    Hi! Wow, this was really amazing. You have such a nice, creative way of writing and I really enjoyed it. This poem was so discriptive and I really liked the ...

    Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:24 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Hi! I regrett not reading it sooner, it was wonderful and I enjoyed reading it! If we were to talk a while You'd be sure to know That all I ...

    Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:02 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 9

    Hi! May I introduce myself, I am lovelife, nice to meet you! Oh My God! That was utterly amazing! I loved reading every word of it! You have such an ...

    Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:59 pm
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: After Reading the Revelation

    Hi! Thank you for asking me to review your wonderful peice. You have a very sweet and creative way of writing, witch I adore. Here are some things I liked: ...

    Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:14 am


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