Published February 12, 2011
The beat of the song, how I wanted it to be sung, and which syllables you put emphasis on might be confusing, so just post here if you want me to post the guitar chords that go with it.
-Alex
Tell me, who's the one you love?
Tell me now before I go to war
Just let me know for sure
Just tell me
Is my love enough?
Is my love enough for you
Or will you pick and choose?
Tell me
We only have so long before the time will come
So you just kiss me now and forget about what we'll become
Tell me, what you want me to do
Do you want me to go right now
And leave you here to drown?
Oh, Tell me
We are two in a few
Give me a quick kiss goodbye
And then I'll go and die
Tell me
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Hi!
Thank you for asking me to review your wonderful peice.
You have a very sweet and creative way of writing, witch I adore.
Here are some things I liked:
I think you did a great job. I really do hope to read more writing like this from you!
Thank you for posting it!
PS~ please don't be afraid to tell me when you have another one coming out, so that I could review it!
Perhaps the chords should go with it. A lot of songs sound weird when you can't hear the music. Also, in songs try for more cleverness and wit. That's the difference between good lyrics and great lyrics.
Can't wait to hear more from you!