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Re: Spilling
Okay, so, I just wanted to say that I really love this poem. I am very curious as to how you came up with this, you are so creative!
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Forever and Always
Howdy! :) I would just like to say that I really enjoyed this, it brightened my day and probably many others as well. I love how it was so simple ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: The Deep
Wow. I do not have the words in my vocabulary to describe how wonderful this was. This was fantastic! Though, some of it was a bit confusing I loved the ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Steam Pirates (updated to version 1.1!)
Over-all this writing was wonderfully written, though there were a few things that caught me off-guard. First of all, you left off commas in quite a few places, you could ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Thousand Yard Stare
I really thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It has the potential to have a tune put to it, it could have easily been put under poems, but it is definitely melody ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet Lover
The line you are speaking of, "It's so hard to find someone who does now." refers to the line before it, "writing this is a joy I dearly seek," I ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: A Thought
This is very deep, and very you. It's almost at a personal level. I really liked reading this poem, but I would like to critique a few things. I suggest ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Among the Moonlight
This is really great! I hope you write more.
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Forsaken Place
This is fantastic! Not that I am a professional sonnet-writer or anything, but this is a very, VERY well written sonnet. (:
May 18, 2013