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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: In The Mirror

    I normally don't read short stories or write them, but your story in particular, caught my attention. I have been seeing it on my feed for a long time, and ...

    Nov 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Erode me]

    I feel like this poem is something a yandere might write. But then again, I would write something like this too, and I'm pretty sure when you are madly in ...

    Nov 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Opening the Door and Inviting Him In

    The way I see this poem is that, when this girl is in love with this guy, but he doesn't know how to treat her. All she wants is his ...

    Nov 20, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Was it really love?

    The first line of your poem strikes me the most. '' It’s crazy how the same person who once made you feel like the happiest version of yourself can also ...

    Nov 19, 2025
  • Poetry » Politics, Satire Re: The Perfect Woman

    I just loved this poem. While somewhat a controversial topic, you handled this poetry wise like a champ. This was beautifully constructed. This poem just really described how women are ...

    Nov 18, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Fairy Tale of Childhood

    I feel like childhood is one of the most golden moments to me in life. The time when we are innocent, beloved, and carefree. The only time where fun, lived ...

    Nov 18, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Para La Princesa Isa

    You must have some really good friends, if they are describing you that way (my friends describe me as obnoxious, loud, and weird). I really enjoyed this poem. It had ...

    Nov 18, 2025
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Greed

    I just loved this short poem. There were just really good lines so let me go over them. First, I like how you compared Greed to a goblin. In some ...

    Nov 17, 2025
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Cowardice

    I really felt this poem. I wouldn't say that you are a coward. I would just say you struggle to really talk to people. Like me. Social anxiety anyone? Overall, ...

    Nov 17, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: to my father, from his daughter

    This poem.... I have no words. I believe this poem is talking about adoption which I can relate to. I am adopted myself, but a beautiful old lady, who I ...

    Nov 14, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Menu

    I really, really, really liked this poem. When people make relatable poems and stories about the actual problems that we face today, it just makes life a whole lot easier ...

    Nov 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I love you, you should know.

    I am a big fan of romantic love poems. I made a few up myself. ''Understand I'm scared to show But I love you You should know'' I'm very scared ...

    Nov 13, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: *******

    I feel like this is a very good poem for Veterans Day. There were just so many very good lines and elements that I loved in this poem so let ...

    Nov 12, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: My 7-Step Emotional Recipe

    This is lowkey a good recipe. At the start of the poem, it's all tears and pain, but towards the end, you learn how to use this ''recipe'' for the ...

    Nov 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: 5th Grade

    I really enjoyed this poem. Something somewhat similar happened to me in 5th grade. I was in 5th Grade I had four best friends A surprise birthday party was what ...

    Nov 10, 2025


Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see a shadow.
— Helen Keller