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Re: "I exist"
I feel like we can all use this poem in our day to day lives. With so much chaos happening around us in the world, we sometimes need to take ...
Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:37 pm -
Re: In The Mirror
I normally don't read short stories or write them, but your story in particular, caught my attention. I have been seeing it on my feed for a long time, and ...
Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:30 pm -
Re: [Erode me]
I feel like this poem is something a yandere might write. But then again, I would write something like this too, and I'm pretty sure when you are madly in ...
Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:23 pm -
Re: Opening the Door and Inviting Him In
The way I see this poem is that, when this girl is in love with this guy, but he doesn't know how to treat her. All she wants is his ...
Thu Nov 20, 2025 3:04 pm -
Re: Was it really love?
The first line of your poem strikes me the most. '' It’s crazy how the same person who once made you feel like the happiest version of yourself can also ...
Wed Nov 19, 2025 3:45 pm -
Re: The Perfect Woman
I just loved this poem. While somewhat a controversial topic, you handled this poetry wise like a champ. This was beautifully constructed. This poem just really described how women are ...
Tue Nov 18, 2025 3:44 pm -
Re: The Fairy Tale of Childhood
I feel like childhood is one of the most golden moments to me in life. The time when we are innocent, beloved, and carefree. The only time where fun, lived ...
Tue Nov 18, 2025 3:38 pm -
Re: Para La Princesa Isa
You must have some really good friends, if they are describing you that way (my friends describe me as obnoxious, loud, and weird). I really enjoyed this poem. It had ...
Tue Nov 18, 2025 3:30 pm -
Re: Greed
I just loved this short poem. There were just really good lines so let me go over them. First, I like how you compared Greed to a goblin. In some ...
Mon Nov 17, 2025 3:57 pm -
Re: My Cowardice
I really felt this poem. I wouldn't say that you are a coward. I would just say you struggle to really talk to people. Like me. Social anxiety anyone? Overall, ...
Mon Nov 17, 2025 3:35 pm -
Re: to my father, from his daughter
This poem.... I have no words. I believe this poem is talking about adoption which I can relate to. I am adopted myself, but a beautiful old lady, who I ...
Fri Nov 14, 2025 3:41 pm -
Re: The Menu
I really, really, really liked this poem. When people make relatable poems and stories about the actual problems that we face today, it just makes life a whole lot easier ...
Fri Nov 14, 2025 3:33 pm -
Re: I love you, you should know.
I am a big fan of romantic love poems. I made a few up myself. ''Understand I'm scared to show But I love you You should know'' I'm very scared ...
Thu Nov 13, 2025 2:13 pm -
Re: *******
I feel like this is a very good poem for Veterans Day. There were just so many very good lines and elements that I loved in this poem so let ...
Wed Nov 12, 2025 6:48 pm -
Re: My 7-Step Emotional Recipe
This is lowkey a good recipe. At the start of the poem, it's all tears and pain, but towards the end, you learn how to use this ''recipe'' for the ...
Mon Nov 10, 2025 2:27 pm
