Greetings! Jumped in for a quick review.
Wonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I typically don't enjoy poems that play around with a lot of rhyme, but it suits this poem perfectly. I got the impression of a doll (Well, duh). Though oddly specific, I got reminded of one of those music boxes with a ballerina, slowly spinning/never faltering.
I honestly don't have anything to critique. Just wanted to put down my thoughts. This was a absolutely wonderful piece, I would love to read similar works in the future.
Points: 127
Reviews: 4
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