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Hi there! In fifteen minutes, review day will end and I lose the competition with my friend (boo). Let's see if I can get this review written, then! Okay, so ...

Hi Exception. Happy review day, I'm obviously here to review so let's get to it. Nitpicks: dug into my flesh you would throw up zipping around his feet. smelled cleaner ...

Oh, hi. Don't mind me, just going to review this. Nitpicks Do you see a bleak world Mr. Jack? Comma before Mr. Jack Do you believe in possessions Mr. Jack? ...

Hi writer. With forcasts pointing to a very close victory between the two teams. Enough of the weather, let's review! Nitpicks at all." it sounded "it" needs to be capitalized. ...

I can't even. What the heck. Well, er, HAPPY REVIEW DAY! Randy is way too gullible. Not every black figure in a robe is the Grim Reaper. Plus, even if ...

Hi there! Happy review day, so let's review!» Nitpicks okay. let’s not "let's" should be capitalized. And its most definitely Its needs a apostrophe so it can be It's Look, ...

Hi there, Kat! Happy review day! Please stop reviewing, you're beating me. Ok, so when reading this, you seem to have a ton of one error: it's. You would think ...

Ok, so, um, character sheets usually go inside blogs. Welcome to YWS! Nationatily: African-American African American isn't really a nationality, it's more of a race. Instead of one big paragraph, ...

Hi there, Dreamer! Welcome to YWS. Happy review day for you have been lucky enough to fall prey to my reviewing antics. (Seven more after this and I review twenty ...

But, but, I don't this the screwdriver works on wood! Anyhow, happy review day! Nitpicks it incase I caught I believe it's in case and was sitauted just The right ...

Oh, hello! Happy review day. Let's REEEEEVIIIEEEWW! Nitpicks but where are you. Ok, since it's a question, that should end in a question mark. around me, when the focus You ...

Hi there, Mrs. *tips imaginary hat* Happy review day! I'm here to kick this work out of the Green room. Ok, so I usually start off with nitpicks but Dreamy ...

Ah, yes. A fellow Skyrim person. I haven't really used Lydia much. No offense to her, but I like mercenaries better. Anyhow, take a late and belated Welcome! Happy review ...

Hi Flite! Such a lovely night this review day and your piece has fallen prey to me! So, happy review day! So the only nitpick I managed to see in ...

Aren't you a lollipop full of murder and craziness? I meant to review this some time ago, but it goes to show you shouldn't review at school! Well, the Nitpicks ...