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This is really well done. It flows very well and the imagery is beautiful done. It's very insightful and has a good ending that leaves the reader satisfied

this is a gorgeous poem. There isn't anything I can find wrong with it, but I just loved it so much that I had to comment on it. well done ...

I did like this poem a lot it was very cute but I thought that it was so perfect so I cannot properly crit it =) sorry it just caught ...

awwww this made me awww XD it is a very touching and sweet poem and I love it so much that therefore I cannot say anything mean about it and ...

first off I am delighted to say you have an enormous amount of talent but a lot of it is raw but with practice it will blossom. There is nothing ...

I really like this it has the beginnings of a really good poem but Stockmar is right you do need to fix the last stanza. But other than that I ...

very god imagery my dear girl. loved it well and truly I am waiting for some more so hurry up silly girl XD some bits need some editing but otherwise ...

full of emotion and terrific! well done. made me want to cause some damage to that person fictional or not...that's hard to do so well done I'd love to see ...

I really liked this. it had good flow for the most. It was very interesting and I think you got the emotions of the kids almost perfect and it made ...

very well done. I am afraid to say that this touched my inner evil and had me giggling. I liked this a lot. The only bad thing I found about ...

thanks everyone for the great feed back I am still writing it and after I have finished I will rewrite the first bit because you guys are right but at ...

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yay my first reply for this piece of writing and it only took a couple of months!! hehehe thanks!!

A little hard to get into at the beginning but once I started I couldn't stop, although I must admit I got a little confused but that made me want ...

This delightful tale has made my day. It is exceptionally witty and wonderful couldn't find any faults as I was snickering to much....I want more