Published February 23, 2008
You Make it
Christmas for Me
In the snowy evenings,
We are so close together.
At the toughest of times,
We comfort one another.
In the morning lightings,
We awake from our soothing slumber.
When we all get home,
The day gets so much better
Because when you are there,
I can’t help but smile.
When it’s the next rising sun,
It’ll still be there, for a while.
So at this time of the year,
Will you help me get that bright sun in my heart?
When I run down those golden stairs,
The only thing I want to see is you right there,
Making this special day as if it were a piece of art.
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awwww this made me awww XD it is a very touching and sweet poem and I love it so much that therefore I cannot say anything mean about it and also i am lost for words except I LOVE IT
please write lots more! =)