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Re: Deep Love
I actually really liked it, but why is it called Deep love? I liked the ryhme but I didny really get what was it about love or crime. I understand ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Birth of the WAR AGE
ok I will change some stuff, but come on guys I want to have some of my stuff in it too. Besides its my story. I want the charecters to ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Birth of the WAR AGE
Dude, is this a variation on the Warhammer 40k scene? Because if it is, it's pretty far gone. Firstly, the Orks were around for ages before humans arrived - they ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Does He See?
Really suscefull poem. But I could even sing. If I could Id make a melody for it, but the problem was it was to short because if you had not ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Teenage love
really beutiful words but what does freestyle means? I dont know really, but it doesnt matter. The negative part of this was that it is to short I am not ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: What do I do with you? (Rap and Rock)
I remember. You helped me to write this poem. Thank you dude I even like it a little bit more.
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
I liked this poem. A lot. But I think you are living in the pre-historic age. People wouldn't think you are crazy if you were building something to fly. It ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
This is a cute little poem, I like the way it is written. However some of the rhymes are forced. This is my best example: When I was just a ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Birth of the WAR AGE
who were the orks again? I thought they were inventions made by the "Brainy Boys." :roll:
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My heart is breaking apart
That was really painfull,but good. And slowly, am being forgotten You should put an I after the comma.
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: I Am Like A Roadway
I really liked the peace.Your song or poem brings moral.But it is to short even though I have a short poem I still like long songs and poems. I dont ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The music
I really enjoyed you song.That was the true meaning of music. That could even become a song its self.If you play on an instrument make a melody for this poem. ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: A weird world
really nice,sweet and cute,But to fast if it was a little bit longer I would have given it a star. The words were beautiful you should have to explain more ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: GEE'S
Offensive and stupid. Even for rap, this had no point, the rhymes were forced, and it was generally bad. You need to post 2 reviews now, which you should've done ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Don't Forget
I really liked it. This song remindes me of who I am. It actually work out really well as a rock song. I think you should maybe ryhme more. Sorry ...
Oct 5, 2008