looby-lou

You really need to read your poem through before you post it up here. There are lots of spelling mistakes and in many places it doesnt scan properly. Keep trying.

Im sorry that i dont know the details... maybe it comes across in the poem that i am ACTUALLY really bad at science...

i'm not going to argue with you for what is your personal opinion no worries! If you could do something for me though, could you explain how to make it ...

I like it. I don't understand Star Wars at all, but this poem kind of makes me realize why my dad forced my to sit through them all! I also ...

tell you what, we shall all now back away from the evil poem, and leave the topic alone... No seriously i thank you all for the comments because this way ...

Wow. That is really cool. It reminded me kind of LOTR?? But then I don't read a lot of this stuff... I liked this! x frm Lucy

soz its not meant to be preachy! x frm lucy

Thanks for all comments- didn't expect so much! I will follow all advice given. However I do not want to edit this poem because it is always good to have ...

Loved it. End. x frm lucy

No offence to the purple balloon but I disagree. It's not everyone who can write a good haiku,and you managed to pull it off well! The air one actually sent ...