lonewolf22

I am not usually one for fan fiction, although this does seem interesting and I am curious as to what will happen next. I also love Marvel and the Avengers. ...

This is the coolest story ever. This really is a good story structurally and in other ways. The technique and writing style is very interesting. There were a few parts ...

This was written very well. The writing style is interesting and the words flow together well. The language used also seems to match the setting. The language is also understandable ...

This is a very well written story. The concept is very intriguing. The role of the clock in the story was very well written. The emotion of the main character ...

This is very well written. You have illustrated the power of music very well. This is well written because others including myself can understand similar experiences and relate, and also ...

This was written very well. The feelings and experiences of love are sometimes hard to express, and you have expressed your feelings well without making it too confusing. I am ...

I really like your writing style and technique, but there a few things that were hard to follow. In the beginning of the chapter, things went a little fast and ...