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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Alien

    Hey KeiPie! Happy reviewing day! Firstly, I would like to say that this is a great poem. I love the subject of it, I think that most people could relate ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I said I'm sorry then goodbye

    Wow, this poem is so amazing, and so sad at the same time. Although I didn't think the style of the poem was very conventional, I liked how you made ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I said I'm sorry then goodbye

    Wow, this poem is so amazing, and so sad at the same time. Although I didn't think the style of the poem was very conventional, I liked how you made ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: does anyone know her?

    Hey Zohali! I've never actually read any of your writing before this, and I wish I had because this is wonderful! I love how straightforward it is, yet it still ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: does anyone know her?

    Hey Zohali! I've never actually read any of your writing before this, and I wish I had because this is wonderful! I love how straightforward it is, yet it still ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 3548 Miles

    This is a wonderful piece of poetry. I love the specifics that you used in it, such as the number 3548. I also like how you turned around the mood ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 3548 Miles

    This is a wonderful piece of poetry. I love the specifics that you used in it, such as the number 3548. I also like how you turned around the mood ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Depressed

    This is a great description! I would like to say that I hope you don't actually feel this way, but if you do, I know poetry always helps me with ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Simple Rain Haiku's

    I think that you did an amazing job with this haiku! It really makes the rain seem so beautiful. Also, I would like to give you props for doing a ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Take Me Home

    Wow, this poem is truly great. Firstly I would like to point out how wonderfully unique your writing style is. I can honestly say I have never read anything else ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the gardener

    I thought that this was an amazing poem. The imagery that you used is truly astounding. Some of the images you used was so grotesque that I felt guilty for ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Gift To You

    This is a very short sweet and to the point poem. I love the briefness of it, yet you manage to get a depth in the meaning of the poem ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Breaking Winter

    Firstly, I would like to say that I love the unusual point of view of this poem. I will admit that I had to read this a few times through ...

    Jun 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Locked Away

    Hi, Trackrunner! Firstly, I would like to point out all the positives I find in this poem. I love how brief it is. It is such a short poem, yet ...

    Jun 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: The Call of Nature

    This poem really did make me laugh. I think that it is a fabulous funny poem. I love the ending to it. It is surprising yet hilarious. The one comment ...

    Jun 23, 2012


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