littleyellowkuma

Hi, I LOVE when people experiment with structure. This interesting drop structure is so strong and immediately brings people into the poem. I love the word vial, it's such an ...

Hi, I think that if you elaborated on the mask idea it would make the poem more dynamic. If you mention it, especially in the opening of your poem, I ...

Hi! I suppose I should have clarified in the poem, but it's too late now for the contest haha, that I meant that because it's so small that's exactly why ...

Thanks for your reply! It's about the ignorant people in my town haha.

HI! Thank you for your critique. Maybe you can answer my question then. Both poems I've posted, I typed them into the box with line breaks and they don't post ...

Hi~ Not really a review, because i think this is a w e s o m e!!! Great job. Here's something that may be helpful in later poems, and maybe ...

If that was how you saw it then go with it!!!! I just personally don't like rhyme haha.

Hi~ I love love love the concept of this. I hate love poetry it often seems forced and cheesy but this is so beautiful and such a sophisticated way of ...

Hi, I see the meaning behind your poem, and think that a lot of hard work and effort went into the making of it, but your use of constant end ...