lilymoore

Kama! *runs and tackles kama* Hi! I was on my way to the doctor’s to refill my medication that calmed my Panic Disorder. Too many “my’s”! eek! My best recommendation ...

Hey Aush, chapter 4 is read and I’m rearing to review. First of all, *announces* this is your shortest chapter yet with only 4,376 words. I thought it read faster ...

Hi there Red_Star! First off, I have to wonder why it is you haven’t had a review yet because in my opinion this is actually fairly good. Waiting being taken ...

Aushy!!! *huggles* First off, I have a nitpick that Marzipan didn’t find. *beams proudly at finding your flaws* When they heard footsteps they immediately stood up… I would recommend putting ...

Conrad, this is such a sweet little story. I was flipping through the forums for something to read that would make me feel better because I’ve just had a rough ...

Blinky my Blink! I told you I would come and I did. I am here. I have read. Now I shall review. I’m not going to touch on nitpick things ...

Hey Esme, saw that part two was up and was like, Whahoo!, something fun to read. And I’m guessing you did split it into parts, at least I’m assuming that’s ...

*huggles her Aushy* Okay, Marzipan picked up on most of the little things and I hate to be repetitive so I’m just going to do what I did for chapter ...

Hey Merlin, here as asked and ready to go. So I want to ask right away, did you re-read the story before posting it in the forums. I know from ...

Hey Fortuna, it’s lily here…I think we met in the chat room the other day…I can’t remember. Not the point, I figured I would give my services as a reviewer ...

Hey there angel. So first off, well, I don’t normally read scripts…ever. They never seem to be quite as interesting as actual stories. But something about this seemed, well, awesome. ...

Sense I did offer to review all of these Aushy, I’m going to do it. But they are a bit long, and most of the problems have been spotted by ...

Hello there cjschoot, the name’s lilymoore but lil works just as well. No time for small talk, I’m just going to review! I’m pulling my knees up to my chest ...

had to be said. Prok, I don’t know how you do it, but you do it and it’s funny…whatever ‘it’ is. I was pealing in laughter throughout the whole story ...

Hey Prok, here cause I harassed the chat for something to review and look, I got what I asked for. Thank you! The other, who had a lovely head of ...