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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Once Upon a Sundae

    Dems knows I goofed. Anyways, I would liked to award you first place. You can PM me whenever to receive your reviews. And Congratulations! ~lilymoore

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Squeeze and Release

    Hey there, Kafka. Sorry for the delay in reply. I would have had the judging finished while I was at pep band Wednesday but turns out the game was actually ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: As I Go (Lily's Contest)

    Hey there, Eli. Sorry this took so long. I would have had the judging finished while I was at pep band Wednesday but turns out the game was actually worth ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Incompetence

    Hey there, Lycando. Sorry this took so long. I would have had the judging finished while I was at pep band Wednesday but turns out the game was actually worth ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Journey To Nevercross Chapter One

    Wahoooo!!! So I’m reviewing this now. (Thanks for the reminder.) Part 1. Nitpicks! **As I read, if I come across anything that seems off or could use some cleaning up, ...

    Jan 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Last of the Golden Days

    Hello TeaRoses, The names lilymoore and I'm here to give you a review. If you'll take it. Oh well, I'll just leave it here anyways. Right off the bat, I'll ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Man in the mirror

    Hello Lycando, Nice to meet you. The names Lily and I’m here to review your story, if that’s okay. Well, even if it isn’t, I’m going to. Mwahahaha! He was ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sound of Tears

    Hey there, yubbies. So I want to start off by saying that it’s always fantastic to me to see writers touching on topics besides love. I may write love poems ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Skyrim (A Fan-made story)

    Hello there. We’ve never met but I’m lilymoore and I freaking love Skyrim! In fact, Dragon slaying was how I spent a good chunk of my time procrastinating over finals ...

    Dec 29, 2012
  • Short Story » General, Action / Adventure Re: Dead Leaves and the Dirty Ground

    Hey there, ThinkinInk! I don’t believe we’ve ever been introduced but you can call me Lily if you like. First off, let me just say that I’m glad to see ...

    Aug 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: seeing things how we'd like to

    PERSY! *wamplesnuggleglomplehugs* Well, now that I got that out of the way - some nitpicks! Not many, actually, just a couple. each voice I grew in my chest has grown ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Sin of Tasting Stars

    Hey there, Story! Do not fear, for Lily is here! Though after reading this, well, you don’t have much to fear. You have a really good poem here. Let me ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: sucking on ice cubes

    Hey there, Dreamwalker! First and foremost, let me just say that I was hooked at the title. Something about the idea and the image that it stirs up, well, right ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Tea with an Extra-Terrestrial

    Hey there, Puckerman. We've never been introduced but the names Lily and I'm here to review your short story, if you don't mind. The first thing I noticed about this ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: raindrops keep falling on my head

    Hey there, Dream! Long time no see but I saw your poem and the title put a ditty in my head and that little ditty turned into a really annoying ...

    Jun 14, 2012


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