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Wow. I'm such a sucker for shorter poems that can convey such deep emotion. This is such a great example of that. I especially love the line: "If I could ...

Oh wow. I really love this piece. I especially like the lines "I broke down to my misery, I couldn't face my fears." and "The Beast, it got its feast. ...

Aww this poem is amazing! At the beginning I was imagining this badass, hardworking queen and to find out you were describing your mom the whole time makes my heart ...

Hello darling. First of all, I have always loved your work. And I love this one. I love the way you compare your anger to a fire. One thing I ...

I love this poem. I am a sucker for symbolism and short poetry, and you have packed a Hulk-sized punch in literally only five lines. Five. That is amazing. I'm ...

If Shakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe collaborated, this poem would be their greatest piece. I love the premise of a speaker addressing their own soul. I think that idea makes ...

Hey thank you for sharing this story! I hope you find a title for it soon! One thing that I would suggest you change is the syntax. Instead of writing ...

Hi thank you for sharing this story! I really like your style of writing, and the premise for the story is really creative! One thing I like is how you ...

Hey great script! As an actress myself, I simply love reading scripts. So much potential in every single one! That being said, here are some things I would change: 1. ...

Wow I was just scrolling through your page to see what your writing style and just... wow. I am blown away. Thank you for sharing this with the world. You ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm new here as well. Hopefully we both get the hang of this soon! The one major criticism I have for this story is how you ...

Hi luv! Thank you for sharing this fanfic! I personally am a huge fan of Percy Jackson, and it was nice to see that people are still creating stories about ...

I actually really love this poem. This tackles a topic that a lot of poets cover, but I've never seen it covered like this. Because you never really get over ...

Beautiful poem! I really really love this one. I am a huge Greek geek so from the beginning I loved the Odyssey allusion. I especially love how you even referenced ...

Wondeful poem! As a theatre kid, I understand the struggle of daily life, and the relief we feel when we are finally onstage doing what we do best. I really ...