Beautiful poem! I really really love this one. I am a huge Greek geek so from the beginning I loved the Odyssey allusion. I especially love how you even referenced the many perils Odysseus had to go through with the Cyclops and sirens and whatnot. I just love that. I also love the repetition of consonants. Rhetoric goes far when used correctly.
However, I feel like unless the goal of this poem was to be a letter to Odysseus, the poem was extremely specific. I feel like if you removed some of the specific details, such as referencing the monsters and the tapestries, this could be an extremely relatable poem that is heightened due to its dual meanings. If you compare the intended audience to Odysseus instead of having it be Odysseus, this could be a wonderful poem about surviving all of life's metaphorical "monsters" and journeys.
Overall great poem. I am such a sucker for Greek allusions haha!
All my love
Lilith
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