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I liked this, mainly because it was short... I absolutely hate the title though... lol. But I can't talk, I'm crap at title making. Anyway, here goes... What I liked: ...

Lol, this is funny. I love where you got the idea from. Well done, even thought the grammer is bad it makes perfect sense and you can see its done ...

I've written an accrostic previously. But this is not good. You haven't even spelled Emmerdale correctly. If you're work is like this when you're bored DON'T POST IT. If you ...

I really liked this; The fact that it was short made me soooooo happy. The word b r o k e n written like that was clever, The fact that ...

Ok, I'm gunna go through this bit by bit. please please take time ot edit your work, it can only get better if you try hard at it. What I ...

Well, this poem has potential thats all under wraps... Changes I'd make: ment= meant "the thought of wander away from this place" wandering away... (this would flow better) "no way ...

Firstly I just want to say; This is really good. And I enjoyed it. What I liked: "and their silent stories." I like the alliteration and how it reminds me ...

No I don't think you should change it. I knew straight away that you were writing from your point of view, great imagery. I loved the leapord spots part. Oh ...

This was different. Which I liked. Its very long though,,, I don't have time to sit here and go through all of it... no matter how much I want to. ...

ARGH the repetition, lol. Ok, Its not my type of thing, I think you knew that already. Couldn't you change the use of "step up" though? I mean, I understand ...

My mistakes Everyday I make mistakes It’s the bane of my existence So many mistakes I have made I put my foot in it everyday, And I don’t know what ...

[color=red] My parents started to cry as shabby camper van drove off. i turn(ed) and i saw the looked cold, but it actually wasn't. the only reason i am here ...

no he never says anything nice. In fact, I liked this poem. A lot. The wind whips [s]long[/s] red marks across her back. The sky turns its [s]gray[/s] GREY face ...

Pleave leave a comment! "I Can't Wait Forever" By: Lisa (©LC Sounds) You've been giving me these looks That no one has [s]gaven[/s] given me before You always seem to ...

Awww brad..... thats so harsh. I wrote crap poetry about my grandparents when I lost them... (i'm not saying this is crap) But leave off her a bit ok? Anyway, ...